#雅思 雅思口說 Part 3,你不是說太少,是說太亂了

最近上課的時候,我觀察到一個現象。 以這題為例:Why do some people choose to move abroad permanently rather than just travelling? "People move permanently because they want better job opportunities. Also, the lifestyle is better. Furthermore, travelling is not enough because you can't really experience the culture. And also, better job opportunities are very important. Moreover, you can meet new people. Additionally, the education system is better for children. So I think moving abroad is a good choice because of job opportunities and lifestyle." Also、furthermore、moreover、additionally 全部用上了。 聽起來很豐富。 但考官其實聽得很痛苦。 因為「better job opportunities」說了兩次,補充了一堆東西,最後結尾只抓回兩個點,其他全部消失。 問題不是內容太少,而是開口之前根本沒有框架。 為什麼會這樣? 因為有些學生是邊說邊想的。 開口的時候不知道自己要說幾個點,說完第一個點之後,突然想到第二個,說完第二個之後,覺得第一個還可以補充,然後第三個點突然跑進來——最後結尾的時候,自己也不知道剛才說了什麼。 這不是英文問題,是說話之前沒有想好結構。 說之前可以先在腦袋裡蓋好一個「框架」 同樣這題: Why do some people choose to move abroad permanently rather than just travelling? 說第一個字之前,先在腦袋裡決定好: 我要說幾個點?兩個。順序是什麼?先說第一種人,再說第二種人。 然後才開口: "I think there are two main reasons why people choose to move abroad permanently rather than just travelling. Firstly, some people move for practical reasons — better career opportunities, education, or political stability. Travelling can give you a taste of these things, but it doesn't give you access to them long-term. Secondly, others move because they built an unexpected life there — they fell in love, formed deep friendships, or simply became a different person abroad. For them, going back would feel like a step backwards." In both cases, it's not really about the destination — it's about what they can no longer get at home." 說完 Firstly 的部分,就完整說完,不要回頭補充。說完 Secondly 的部分,也是一樣,最後可以再加一個總結。 框架先建好,每個點說完就往下走。 所以下次回答 Part 3 之前,先停一下。 在腦袋裡問自己:我要說幾個點?我要怎麼讓考官一路聽得懂我在說什麼?
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