The reason why I'm here, is

to tell a story

About a boy and a girl

About ambiguous

About promises

About happiness

About endless wishes

Then, that day,

The women and the man

The rain

The train

The unexpected other man

At last, all we gain

is only in our brain.

“說書人”

我來這裡是要,說一個故事

關於一個男孩和女孩

關於曖昧

關於承諾

關於快樂

關於那些未來的期許

然後,那一天,

是一個女人和一個男人

是雨

是火車

是一位意外的第三人

最後.我們僅剩的

就只存在腦海而已。


東吳吳大衛

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would it be better if use the word "ambiguities" ?
to match the nouns and sounds
just a thought.
:)



- Si vis pacem, para bellum.
2
Nah .....I need the "s" in the end.

But that is a good advice, let me think about it.

thanks, Mr. juju!

And what the hell I STILL didn't get your card!

damn it.....
1
hello Teller David (hope you don't mind the name :P
it's hard to tell the reason in few words, but i just want to tell you I love it!!
Keep going!!!!!!

文房五寶
0
haha, never mind.

I'm glad to hear that you like me piece.

If using English would interfere with your expression.

It will be fine to type in Mandarin.

講中文也通拉哈哈,別理我跟和平鴿在那裏發神經哈哈
1
haha!! it's not the problem
I just cannot describe the feeling in my heart.
I just thought typing English is the rule of this piece. XDDDDDDD
Or maybe a kind of fashion~~I just follow your step~hahaha

文房五寶
1
哈哈,其實你這種講不出來的感覺就是我常用的寫作手法拉(或者該說這是我的文風?)

我常運用片段跟暗示的方式,

然後達到我甚麼都沒講,然後你卻甚麼都知道了的效果,

這種作者跟讀者的默契感,正是我最喜歡的部分了。

Anyway, hope you enjoy it!

如果喜歡的話,把它也給你喜歡的人或是朋友看看吧XD

我會很高興的!
1
anywat

wat you mean?!
3
haha, stop picking my word!

or someday i'll write a poem about cooking a pigeon into fried chicken!

XDDD
2
go for it~~~ I am expecting hahahaha

Maybe I should write a poem about Goliath eating David?!

hahahahahahahha, nevermind, I am just messing with ya!
0
Goliath eating David is fine,

I'm more worry about you'll make that poem into Goliath is "fooling" with David or something like that...

(gross)
2
holy shit..........i think i know what you mean....
0
Sure you did.....XDDDD
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