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#經驗分享 #OET writing #護理類 #澳洲註冊護士

2022年8月6日 08:12
寫作... 要說什麼呢 先用模考題目來說吧 連結:
格式: 1. 日期: 澳洲是用- 日/月/年 譬如今天就是:10/02/2019 妳也可以寫成 10 February 2019,不過我覺得最好不要 因為我是個非常懶惰的人,我會用的方法一定是最簡單又不容易忘的 2. 收信人:Ms Georgine Ponsford,通常可以從Writing Task 那邊找到。 3. 機構名:Community Retirement Home 4. 地址:大家都知道英文地址跟中文相反吧? #舉例: QUT地址:2 George St, Brisbane City QLD 4000 在信上的格式就是: 2 George St(門牌號+街道名) Brisbane City(區域名) QLD 4000 (州名+郵遞區號) #再舉個例子: QUT KG 校區地址:149 Victoria Park Rd, Kelvin Grove QLD 4059 在信上的格式就是: 149 Victoria Park Rd Kelvin Grove QLD 4059 好的,再回到題目的地址怎麼寫? (103 Light Street, Newtown) 答案: 103 Light Street(門牌號+街道名) Newtown(區域名) (州名+郵遞區號)沒給就不用寫:)讚 5. Dear 稱謂+收信人姓(名可有可無,反正前面已經寫過了 #例子:Dear Ms Ponsford 6. Re: 稱謂+病人名姓 Mr Lionel Ramamurthy ------好以上就是第一段開始前要的格式,絕對不能錯哦------ 第一段:要寫你寫這封的目的,全篇的口吻要專業有禮貌,不能口語話。有點像是在寫email. Thank you for considering this referral for 病人名姓, a 63-year-old(病人的年紀很重要) widow(婚姻狀況,視情況而定要不要提) who was admitted to our hospital on 04/02/2019 (入院日期也重要)with pneumonia(入院原因). He is going to be discharged tomorrow and will need your further care within the community. 這就可以是標準的第一段。再來讀一下Writing Task: Using the information given in the case notes, write a 『discharge letter』 to 『Ms Georgine Ponsford』, Resident Community Nurse at 『the Community Retirement Home』, 『103 Light Street, Newtown』. This letter will accompany Mr Ramamurthy back to the retirement home upon 『his discharge tomorrow』. 是不是幾乎都是資訊?直接告訴你寫這封Referral Letter 的目的是什麼,對吧 所以題目一拿到,可以先讀Writing Task去了解考官要什麼, 再返回來看最上面那段的資訊寫什麼:Mr Lionel Ramamurthy(病人), a 63-year-old, is a patient in the medical ward of which you are Charge Nurse(你的角色) 然後再看遍題目給的所有資訊,去抓重點。 第二段: Mr Ramamurthy has made a routine recovery. (因為他沒什麼特殊的病程,所以用著個帶過就行) His inflammatory markers have gone back to normal and he is afebrile. Mr Ramamurthy is able to walk and practices his daily activities slowly but independently. He still has a dry cough and has some chest and abdominal pain. Mr Ramamurthy has gained some weight following our dietitian’s review. (簡單說明一下他現在的狀況(Medical progress)就好,之前什麼Medical background 都不用管!因為是在醫院發生的事,現在你要做的事告訴收信人,病人在的狀況) *現實生活中,醫生可能會多少提到一點,因為沒有字數限制嘛~ *但是如果病人在醫院有住過ICU,或是一些不正常的住院病程,那就要寫。 第三段: Mr Ramamurthy’s past medical history includes diet controlled diabetes, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease and osteoarthritis for which he takes voltaren. Medical history可以寫一下,然後提一下用什麼藥控制病情。 但是如果藥太多太複雜了,就可以寫:詳情請見附錄。 *但是如果題目有特別給這個藥要怎麼用,那就是重點,要詳細跟別人解釋麼用。 Mr Ramamurthy’s eyesight has also decreased since his cataracts were removed 16 months ago and he needs a check-up for his eyes. 因為是未來要檢查嘛,未來病人就歸Community Nurse管,所以要跟人家說一下。 第四段: (出院之後Discharge plan很重要要寫!) I would appreciate it if you could encourage and monitor Mr Ramamurthy’s fluid and nutrition intake post discharge. He also needs to keep warm to help prevent the recurrence of chest infection. Mr Ramamurthy can be administered paracetamol for his chest and abdominal pain when he requires it.  (告訴Community Nurse妳想要她替妳為這個病人做什麼?然後謝謝人家幫妳做事。 Should you have any further enquiries, please do not hesitate to contact me. (必寫,直接背起來!) Yours sincerely, Charge Nurse(或其他稱謂) Newtown Public Hospital(你的醫院) 這是官方給的範文:
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好的~ 以上就是初步對OET 寫作的介紹 字數好多,如果有什麼錯字歡迎指教~ 然後這篇英文範例是我自己寫的 成績應該能拿到350,也就是B的最低分數~ 不是寫得特別好,但好歹及格哈哈...
這是我的公開IG, 裡面的內容包括我如何準備英文 在澳洲留學的心境、生活、護理現狀和移民等 有興趣的可以追蹤我哦~
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