因為期末要英文報告所以你了報告時要用的稿子,但筆者英文不是很好由其是文法,希望有高少能幫忙訂正指教,感謝m(_ _)m

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When we talk about a robot, a soul robot
, which character of a soul robot will enter your mind?

Does it has ability of thinking like human?
Such as movie "I, Robot", it must help humankind to deal with many things.
Maybe it also help me to complete my homework.

The second feature in my mind is "Love".
We regard a robot as a family member, giving it much love and care as if we treat human baby.
Relatively,they also repay their love as a real people.

Dream is the last property that I believe it is an overachieving for a robot with soul.
Look this picture. It orignal form "A.I. Artificial Intelligence".
In order to become a real boy, the robot
, David is convinced that the Blue Fairy, from the story The Adventures of Pinocchio, will transform him into a human boy.
Although his dream does not come true, the alien help him to revive his late mother one day.
Monica tells David that she loves him, and has always loved him, as she drifts to sleep for the last time.
David lies down next to her, closes his eyes and goes "to that place where dreams are born".

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There, we will introduce the current robot with soul reasearch.
This is a movie "Luxo Jr",produce by Pixar.
In this movie, we can see a machine acts like a mankind.
They interact with each other by emotion as if they can think.
And there is a reasearcher do reasearch was inspired by Luxo Jr
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Guy Hoffman, the co-director in MIT?media innovation lab.
He is an animator, jazz musician, and roboticist.
He devotes himself to research of physical action and joint action in humans and robots.
A Robotic Desk Lamp is his representative works and it's inspiration from Luxo Jr.
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A Robotic Desk Lamp research field contains human-robot fluency, non-anthropomorphic robotic, and nonverbal behavior.
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Finally, let me introduce some released robot in the current market.
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NAO is a humanoid robot designed to educate student.
It releases on France in 2006.
NAO became a teaching aids from primary school through university
, and it help student learn programming in a fun and practical way.
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Pepper is a social robot designed to live with humans.
It releases on Japan in 2015.
It can converse with you,recognize and react o your emotions, and move and live autonomously.
Pepper's goal is to learn and grow step-by-step by so that one day he can be your companion at home.?
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Romeo is still in development.
Romeo is designed to be a?genuine personal assistant and companion, especially to elders.
Like a housekeeper, he can help people with disabilities to move, or help their housework,and so on.
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已經刪除的內容就像 Dcard 一樣,錯過是無法再相見的!
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有些地方太中文,
小錯誤不少…
但是不影響理解,
祝你報告順利~
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Maybe it also help me to complete my homework.
-> Maybe it could also complete my homework

Relatively, they also repay their love as a real people. (not exactly sure what you're trying to say)

Dream is the last property that I believe it is an overachieving for a robot with soul. (我覺得好像有點怪怪的)
-> I believe that having a dream is the last overacheiving property for a robot with soul.

Although his dream does not come true, the alien help him to revive his late mother one day. (his late mother?)

報告加油

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小魚2
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標題中文錯字就算了 內文中文也錯字...囧
報告的排版太擠了 尤其最後一頁還擠在一起
(9)的圖沒看到
但是第二句的問號是...?
希望你自己確稿過一次再PO文請教他人
你這樣的態度是不正確的
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英文演講其實不用太care文法是否完全正確
重要的是能不能讓聽眾理解
就像跟外國講師在演講也不見得文法全對
但卻要能夠簡單易懂
講稿大致沒問題
但我覺得倒數第二張投影片文字密度稍高
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小錯誤蠻多的~~
不過口說應該是還ok
練順一點在上就好
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Relatively,they also repay their love as a real people.
其實是想說他們會像真人一般與以回饋
Although his dream does not come true, the alien help him to revive his late mother one day.
→Although his dream does not come true, the alien help him to recreate his late mother from DNA. Yet the cloned person only lives one day.
其實是想說做出已故的母親的複製人,但複製人只能活一天
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有些自己在一起是因為要跑動話,但轉成JPG就會變成這樣
已經刪除的內容就像 Dcard 一樣,錯過是無法再相見的!
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Relatively, they also repay their love as a real people. (改成: just like any other human being 可能比較容易理解)

不能用 late mother 這個說法,可以該成 deceased mother 或者是簡單一點 dead 也可

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小魚2
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一份好的ppt其實應該只有圖片跟關鍵字,前面都還不錯,但最後幾張有點描述太多...
講稿只是講的大綱,英文演講小錯誤其實還好,除非老師特別刁英文,基本上我報告小抄只有重點條列跟專有名詞www
內容都上台臨場發揮的,原則上妳應該最理解妳的ppt,可以自己看圖說故事才是最好的,而不是全部靠講稿XD畢竟妳不是純粹演講,而是ppt報告啊Www
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